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You've got to be joking...
Dr. Common Sense thinks your, uh, "story" about Nurse Betty stinks. I don't think her finger was up your ass - I think your own head was up your ass when you wrote this. Give us a break.
Cute
Cute story, keep going with it, this could turn out quite interesting.
The good ol' prostrate
Started out real well..liked the idea..give me more details..I'm a detail man..I've had my prostrate stroked and man more details are needed..that full feeling..the
delightful pressure..the mind blowing "nut"..
It was bad enough to start with...
but when I read about the abdominable muscle, I just laughed and quit.
Nice one!
That was some funny shit!!!
Laugh
It was good for a laugh.
Second the laugh
I must second the laugh comment. This was certainly fun to read, but moreso amusing than erotic. Still, I like the writing style.
More please
Not a bad story, but more than a bit too short, the Ch. 01 indicates you are planning to add more. A longer story with a bit more build up would be nice. I think longer chapters would also be appreciated.
Great Fantasy
Great fantasy story. Just to lie back and knock one out to.
sadly, yet another ch.1 going nowhere
Six years later no ch. 2
The author has posted more recently, but it too is an abandoned first chapter.
Please continue this story.
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