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Early Morning Birthday Present

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by Anonymous

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by katib06/26/07

Prevarication?

It's a rather bland account. I am puzzled, though. Author says the wife lied, using the past tense of to lie, meaning to say an untruth. but that meaning does not fit the context! Why could the poor woman not just "lay" there, luxuriously recling in the past tense of to lie, meaning to recline. Does anyone edit these stories?
---Katib

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by fumunda cheeze06/26/07

A For Effort but phonier than a $3 bill

Woke up pussy in the early morning between a husband and wife except in a wild dream, is just so much bullshit after the honeymoon. For every instance of this fantasy there are 10,000 cases of reality where the only words out of the wife's mouth is "Quit that" you son of a bitch.

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by Anonymous06/26/07

Just a stroke

You would get a higher rating if this little stroke story were in the erotic coupling category instead of Loving Wives. There is no story here, just sex. If I don't get a minimum plot combined with some kind of character description, I just don't care because it's only words strung together without any merit.

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by Anonymous06/26/07

Good

liked it.

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by Nightowl2206/27/07

Good

But short!! Good to see a straight story instead of something like a gangbang, or such..

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