All Comments on 'A flower still blooms'

This poem was mentioned in Wednesday's New Poems Reviews.

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the eye rhyme now/sow messes up the flow of this poem, similar to a polyrhythm--you have different beats here that conflict with each other, you gotta commit to one or the other. it's not just accepting end rhyme and meter as opposed to blank/free verse; if i read this out loud to you you'd probably say "that's not how i wrote it."

thank you for your comment, i really liked the last 2 lines of this one :)

found and grown by a loved one gone. TK U MLJ LV NV