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by LeBroz06/20/07

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This poem was mentioned in Wednesday's New Poems Reviews.


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by Amyfriend06/29/07

What a delightful poem.

You could have gone on and covered more States (inc: Florida) but alas you didn't. However I did love what you covered, its a while since I was moonbathing. Thanks

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by lorencino11/24/07

Two states from beginning to end

This is precisely about two states, one the source and the other the filfulment of your desires. Precise telling of an emotional response to the nature of these locations launches the reader's imagination into their own personal needs in nature.

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