by scarfaccio
I thought your adventure was well told and very erotic. You used language that created a feeling that these events were real and current. There was a type of complexity that created interest but this could be why it was not fully a 'cock-in-hand' tale. The play in voyeurism and exhibitionism was teasing, enticing and pleasurable.
I guess it has been some time since you presented it and I'm sorry I didn't come across it earlier. Top story!
It was written pretty good. But I think to find a girl like that in real life, is really rare. Seriously, and your a guy? Yup, that's why.
Fantastic story,reminds me of the way a few of my former co-workers and I would mindfuck each other.Could have been a little longer,but,Thank You,for not including measurements.