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by Skoobi06/20/07

Well Expressed

The confusion of the poet's feelings are aptly described. I liked the lines "she trips over her need for him,
and crumples at his feet.
He tugs at the bond
and she groans.
Bastard." and "private evidence
of a secret lust".
This poet does very well with words at times. Good job.

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by emaalr08/19/07

very descriptive...

has a definite reality and builds nicely as it is read...
nice work

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