All Comments on 'Rian'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
hot!

please continue. i cant wait for Rian to return the favor.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Wow!

Great story. Full of detail and passion. Please continue writing about these characters.

skywriterxxxskywriterxxxalmost 17 years ago
great story!

Well done, good use of detail. and your username...not kinky at all! I look forward to more submissions from you!

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
HOT

Please keep going, can't wait!

Gus AsparGus Asparover 16 years ago
lucky Rian!

Can't wait to read on...

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Nice story!

I hope Rian has a sister who Grace treats equally well. (I volunteer to play the part of either Grace or the sister. ;) )

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Interesting premise.

But the sex is too abrupt.

Needed some more 'convincing' to get him to be willing to engage with her.

Perhaps her describing how she'd play with his cock. And how she'd give him a blowjob.

Touching herself and describing how good he'd feel if he were doing the touching.

Too quick.

Three stars.

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