and I loved it! Awesome job on the beach story Darlin' keep up the gr8 writin!
Good one, hun. Fun to read. Good luck. xoxoxo
This was a pretty good stroke story. A bit hard to believe, but pretty good.
and quite enjoyable (the story that is)
This was a great story, TE ... a little bit of voyeurism, a little bit of exhibitionism and a whole lot of fun for your readers.
A good one, TE. Good luck in the contest.
I think I'm glad I didn't enter this contest! LOL Good hard stroke there, TE.
This makes for an excellent bedtime story. Thank you for turning me on to it. As per usual, the writing was wonderful, and the story thoroughly entertaining. I loved it.
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and I loved it! Awesome job on the beach story Darlin' keep up the gr8 writin!
Now that is some serious stroke!
Good one, hun. Fun to read. Good luck. xoxoxo
Pretty Good
This was a pretty good stroke story. A bit hard to believe, but pretty good.
That's some hot sex...
and quite enjoyable (the story that is)
Wonderful romp
This was a great story, TE ... a little bit of voyeurism, a little bit of exhibitionism and a whole lot of fun for your readers.
A hot quickie
A good one, TE. Good luck in the contest.
Hard act to follow!
I think I'm glad I didn't enter this contest! LOL Good hard stroke there, TE.
Lovely.
This makes for an excellent bedtime story. Thank you for turning me on to it.
As per usual, the writing was wonderful, and the story thoroughly entertaining. I loved it.
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