All Comments  for

A Royal Sacrifice Ch. 05

byRedHairedandFriendly©
All
Comments (6)
by Anonymous

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by FazilKotuk06/30/07

Jealousy rears its head....

....I sense a great deal of conflict in the making. Definitely a gripping chapter, at any rate. Certainly a good sign of suspense in this chain story.

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Talynnda07/01/07

INCREDIBLE!!!

I LOVED it. You are truly a master, Red. I love how you fleshed out the character of Drest.
And now we have the mystery-- who killed Evie's parents? And why?
What a pivotal chapter!
You are remarkable.

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Darkniciad07/01/07

A turning point

This is the point that will make or break our lovely Queen. Wonderful interaction between the characters, drawing the strands of the previous chapters together. Well done, Red!

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by deathlynx07/01/07

Moving quite nicely!

A wonderful chapter and the story moves along wonderfully...I can't wait to discover what's in store for them all!

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by 07/04/07

characters are growing into their natural roles

That was a masterful chapter!

Maharat

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Anonymous06/09/12

Confused

Why can I only read certain chapters?

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.

Click here to leave your own comment on this submission!  or
Back to A Royal Sacrifice Ch. 05  or
More submissions by RedHairedandFriendly.

Add a
Comment

Post a public comment on this submission (click here to send private anonymous feedback to the author instead).

Post comment as (click to select):

You may also listen to a recording of the characters.

Preview comment

Forgot your password?

Please wait

Change picture

Your current user avatar, all sizes:

Default size User Picture  Medium size User Picture  Small size User Picture  Tiny size User Picture

You have a new user avatar waiting for moderation.

Select new user avatar:

   Cancel