All Comments on 'A Royal Sacrifice Ch. 05'

by RedHairedandFriendly

Sort by:
  • 6 Comments
FazilKotukFazilKotukalmost 17 years ago
Jealousy rears its head....

....I sense a great deal of conflict in the making. Definitely a gripping chapter, at any rate. Certainly a good sign of suspense in this chain story.

TalynndaTalynndaalmost 17 years ago
INCREDIBLE!!!

I LOVED it. You are truly a master, Red. I love how you fleshed out the character of Drest.

And now we have the mystery-- who killed Evie's parents? And why?

What a pivotal chapter!

You are remarkable.

DarkniciadDarkniciadalmost 17 years ago
A turning point

This is the point that will make or break our lovely Queen. Wonderful interaction between the characters, drawing the strands of the previous chapters together. Well done, Red!

deathlynxdeathlynxalmost 17 years ago
Moving quite nicely!

A wonderful chapter and the story moves along wonderfully...I can't wait to discover what's in store for them all!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
characters are growing into their natural roles

That was a masterful chapter!

Maharat

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Confused

Why can I only read certain chapters?

Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Post as:
Anonymous