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by Swedeq06/29/07

Needs a sequel ...

..... you've laid excellent groundwork..... not the rest of the story....

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by SouthernAphrodite06/29/07

Good concept, lacks followthrough

An excellent premise for a major story series. You could have gone into more detail when he wandered into his dream world during the first couple of times--the bit about being a shaman and all that kinda seemed to come out of nowhere. Otherwise, an excellent start for an interesting series of stories.

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by LynnMck05/30/12

I Don't Know . . .

what kind of shit you were on when you wrote this, but it must have been good :)

I hope you don't run out of it too soon, 'cause I would like a couple more chapters.

Lynn

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