I've watched and read your stories for a while now and I perplexed. You have truly wonderful ideas and there is usualy a great beginning, but then you lose steam or something. There just isn't enough depth to what you write.
If I could make a suggestion or two? This isn't a NASCAR event where the first guy across the line wins. This is more a Gran Prix tournement and we're all building up to a championship. Slow down the stories and develop them into deeper pieces of work.
Some of you ideas could really end up being hot, erotic, and drool-worthy stories if you would just let them flow and not try to punch them out en masse.
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Anonymous06/30/07
Very, Very Poor Tales
I agree with the comments of "Keep Trying or Quit". However I go one step further in that you have a tendency to disrespect people in your stories as well which I find totally offensive. I enjoy hot erotic tales that respect people regardless of the situation that they are in, regardless of their race, and/or regardless of their sex. Note: I happen to be a mature BM.
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Keep Trying or Quit
I've watched and read your stories for a while now and I perplexed. You have truly wonderful ideas and there is usualy a great beginning, but then you lose steam or something. There just isn't enough depth to what you write.
If I could make a suggestion or two? This isn't a NASCAR event where the first guy across the line wins. This is more a Gran Prix tournement and we're all building up to a championship. Slow down the stories and develop them into deeper pieces of work.
Some of you ideas could really end up being hot, erotic, and drool-worthy stories if you would just let them flow and not try to punch them out en masse.
Very, Very Poor Tales
I agree with the comments of "Keep Trying or Quit". However I go one step further in that you have a tendency to disrespect people in your stories as well which I find totally offensive. I enjoy hot erotic tales that respect people regardless of the situation that they are in, regardless of their race, and/or regardless of their sex. Note: I happen to be a mature BM.
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