A Different Sort of Camelot

Twist on an old Tale

Nice start to a story that seems to be destined for several follow-up chapters. I would like more details myself, with a little more of the history between the two you have introduced so far, or is it the three with Merlin in the mix? I hope you are up following the promising start.

Morgan or Morgause?

From what I remember, Morgan was the younger sister, and Morgause was the older one; it was Morgause that was married to Lot of Lothian, and mother to Mordred.

(Your prose is good, though, and I am interested in further reading.)

Good story

Please keep writing. Can't wait for the next chapter.

That's...sad

That really made me hate Arthur and Merlin...A lot. In fact, they wer downrite bastards...I was so hopeful that they would be lovers again like Morgan thought, and it really sorta broke my heart when he was all cold at the end...He's not my favorite mideival king anymore!

i wish there was more to this story!!! It's so good it should have a second chapter!!

I like it can u write more

:D

Someone been enjoying mists of avalon?