All Comments on 'Betrothed Ch. 03'

Absolutely loving this story! Please continue! :)

Good story, but really, your chapter's need to be longer...it doesn't do a good story justice to have such 'miniature' chapters....

Your killing me!!!!!!!!!! first off your chapters are too short...don't that pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee...and second don't take so long updating..... but apart from that TERRIFIC STORY

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please keep going lovin this story

There's spanking used for discipline, and then there's BEATING used in abuse. I was fully prepared to give this installment a rating of 1 because Nick ABUSED Allison. His sincere apology convinced me to raise it up to a 3/5. But the single page installments will never ever get you a 5 from me.