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Betrothed Ch. 03

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by michchick9806/30/07

Great story so far

Absolutely loving this story! Please continue! :)

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by Anonymous07/01/07

Nice...but....

Good story, but really, your chapter's need to be longer...it doesn't do a good story justice to have such 'miniature' chapters....

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by angelwings102707/01/07

OMG!!!!!!!!

Your killing me!!!!!!!!!! first off your chapters are too short...don't that pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee...and second don't take so long updating..... but apart from that TERRIFIC STORY
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by Anonymous07/06/07

cont please

please keep going lovin this story

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