homeLoving WivesLeather ExhibitionPublic Comments

All Comments  for

Leather Exhibition

byRBLL©
All
Comments (4)
by Anonymous

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by tigertony06/30/07

didnt care for story

story wasnt written very well, didnt keep my attention. i was wanting it over with. but kept on reading to hope it got better. it didnt

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Anonymous06/30/07

Ummm....

it gave me a headache.

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Anonymous06/30/07

Stop The Insanity

This isn't a well written story. It was poorly conceived and not executed with any firm purpose at all. Go find a course or two in writing and pay attention to what is taught there!

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Anonymous06/30/07

Look for an editor

pressurising neat word since you make up spelling do we make up the meaning? The first paragraph boucnhed too much for me with what voice you are writing in, not enough commas and so what confusing. I thought after read your first paragraph you would be able to understand mine.

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.

Click here to leave your own comment on this submission!  or
Back to Leather Exhibition  or
More submissions by RBLL.

Add a
Comment

Post a public comment on this submission (click here to send private anonymous feedback to the author instead).

Post comment as (click to select):

You may also listen to a recording of the characters.

Preview comment

Forgot your password?

Please wait

Change picture

Your current user avatar, all sizes:

Default size User Picture  Medium size User Picture  Small size User Picture  Tiny size User Picture

You have a new user avatar waiting for moderation.

Select new user avatar:

   Cancel