All Comments on 'Elli's First Time Ch. 02'

I loved it , i loved how you started it out and everything just all fell into place, very hot storie had to get my toys out and play while i was reading your storie , keep up the great work and cant wait to read more of your stories

You're sure this is your 2nd story in 1st person? It was a great quickie. I you said that this is the "final" chapter in this series. Too bad, 'cause it sounds like the rest of Elli's vacation will be verrrry interesting.