I did like the story, though it was a bit brief. You should definitely write another, perhaps explaining more about the alien, and maybe telling things from his point of view. I do not know if you really want to focus on emotions here, but it would be nice to see a connection form between the two of them.
English
It was interesting--I would like to see more
I did like the story, though it was a bit brief. You should definitely write another, perhaps explaining more about the alien, and maybe telling things from his point of view. I do not know if you really want to focus on emotions here, but it would be nice to see a connection form between the two of them.
a bit of a twist
A nice twist at the end, I thought *she* was the alien.
Different
This was a different type of story, maybe a little clinical though. I would like to 'see' it through the alien's eyes too.
Millie
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