Good Job! This shows that your not only a good editor but a good writer as well. You do our little El Paso group proud.
DG Hear
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Anonymous07/01/07
I must admit
It's very interesting, seeing so many excellent writers cover the same theme. I hope it is enjoyable for you writers -- it certainly is for us readers!
Techsan, and well up to your usual fine standards. it is amazing how many variations there are to a common theme, and all seem to be well received. Thank You. Ronnie W.
The descriptions were good, I thought.. I missed their being together except for dinners.. The thing that gets me about this story... how many men love a woman more than life?? If I knew it would kill me I think I could put things off for a day or two.. I really don't see him being in a "Wanted-- Dead or Alive" situation for a fair fight.. He might not be a favorite person in town but it's a bit much to be shot down; but that's the story and the song.. Another good read!
English
Crying for a sequel!
So what happens to Faleena and her son?
I loved he first part of this - the description of the country was almost lyrical.
Great job!
Regards, Jack
Just Wonderful - Cowboy
Great little story. Follows the song quite well. Thank Buddy.
Good One Tecsan
Good Job! This shows that your not only a good editor but a good writer as well. You do our little El Paso group proud.
DG Hear
I must admit
It's very interesting, seeing so many excellent writers cover the same theme. I hope it is enjoyable for you writers -- it certainly is for us readers!
Delightful...
take on the lyrics. I'm curious about Faleena's son though...do we find out? A great addition to our El Paso group.
Another worthy addition to the El Paso challenge
Techsan, and well up to your usual fine standards. it is amazing how many variations there are to a common theme, and all seem to be well received. Thank You. Ronnie W.
Well-written
The descriptions were good, I thought.. I missed their being together except for dinners.. The thing that gets me about this story... how many men love a woman more than life?? If I knew it would kill me I think I could put things off for a day or two.. I really don't see him being in a "Wanted-- Dead or Alive" situation for a fair fight.. He might not be a favorite person in town but it's a bit much to be shot down; but that's the story and the song.. Another good read!
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