All Comments on 'Lindsi's Mistake'

Very good story. Well written and nice plot. I hope there will be a sequel

I also hope there is a sequal

that was amazing... very hot... very hot indeed... kinda makes me want to go break a vase *wink*

I have to say, this was an awesome story. The characters were good, I'm personally a huge fan of maid stories, and you pulled it off REALLY well. The only thing, though? The poor girl just spent all that time being abused and raped, her boss has the audacity to order her to clean the sheets that are covered in blood because he raped her so violently.....and she says something like "a woman's work is never done"? That just seems so wrong in every way. She could have said anything else that wouldn't make her seem like he asked her to cook dinner and then afterwords asked for a cookie. It was really good up until the very end, though.