All Comments on 'Breaking in a New Girl'

Nice story line by an accomplished author, greatly enjoyed it.

loved the bit about her being a NASCAR driver - well done - your writing style is very good and humorous too.

I will be reading all your stories... after I recover and reload from this one... Thanks!! Ace

..written with great savvy in just the right easy-going vernacular, but learn to build up more tension and spice up with more original descriptives, less hackneyed terminology. And thank the Lord for your intelligence and high sex drive.

Bravo!

A good story, but please get your basic anatomy correct, the Hymen is at the ENTRANCE to the vagina, not halfway (actually about 4 inches along it in this story !!) I refer to this part of your story - "The head of his cock opened her puffy pussy lips and then slipped in a couple of inches. She was biting her lower lip fearful of the pain she was sure would follow. He was still holding her in the air as if she was a feather and then lowered her another couple of inches. This time she gasped as his huge cock hit her hymen and then opened her up even more as it parted" No, it's definitely at the entrance, so Jo would have had to rupture it to get her "teepee shaped fingers" into her - see (As I was saying this I had folded my fingers into a teepee shape and began to insert them into her hot wet pussy. She was so aroused her pussy was actually dripping juice.) So please tell it as it really is, as it detracts fdrom an otherwise good story. Thanks

+++++ light and enjoyable reading;

+++++ well edited

- not too deep in plot and character building;

- somewhat far into the too-good-to-be-true-or-even-likely side

Thank You, looking forward for more,

Simon

Licking pussy is one of my favorite things to do but fucking one is my favorite. I also like to play with a dick as well. Horny in Va.