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by wildsweetone06/25/07

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i mentioned your poem in the new poem review thread in the poetry forum: http://forum.literotica.com:81/showthread.php?p=23 167718#post23167718
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by KOLKORE04/05/08

Suddwenly I need some air in the room...

This one left me breathing a little harder...
And it's interesting too; at different parts of the poem I could have sworn ir was written from a woman pov, then it is obviosly a man...I guess it makes it an absolutely erotic poem...

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