Ashley's in Double Trouble

hot

thought it was great. love a nice forceful fuck once and a while. keep it up.

Sick Assholes

I kept reading because I thought the story would turn around and she would get revenge on her asshole brothers but, you let me down . Any asshole who has to force sex on someone is a sick bastard and pretty ugly as well . As a writer , you are not setting a good example .

Reality Check

At 17 she should well know that taking a shower was removing evidence. All she had to do was go to the hospital. DNA would have proved who it was. What many people don't know is that now there is a way to show it was non-consensual. Anyway both of them were over 18 and that makes it rape. Video tape or not her story could stand if she told all the truth plus I am afraid to go home.

hot

please continue!

Nice one!

This was a really nice story, I liked the mixture of sex & violence, and I'd love to read about the "long two weeks" ahead of those three!

Neat

I like how the brothers have absolute control over her, and enjoy double penetrating her.

I Dunno....

This is a rape story with a victim. I wish stories where sex and forced, and somebody ends up unhappy and blackmailed would be better off with a sort of warning, unless it's in the Non-Con section. This kind of thing may bring up some very bad memories for an unsuspecting reader. I wish I hadn't read it. It would have been completely hot for me if she'd woke up curious or wanting more. The extreme callousness of the brothers killed it for me, filling me with anger rather than delight or lustful feelings. I hope this one is fiction and not bragging.

What is this sick shit supposed to be???

You are one sick bastard... If you want to write crap like this, put it in the non-consent so the rest of us are forewarned... I hope that you get raped sometime, so that you know how it feels...

Nice job

This was a great story that I had too read it twice, please make some more like this

Also

Ok whoever said reality check HUD an idiot, it's a story only, and maybe she actually liked it, and once again awesoMe story man sounds like it was fun to think thisup, also this should go under both taboo/incest and nonconsent/reluctance

VERY SIKY AND DISLOVINGLY

I FELT SORY FOR KEEPING READ IT COS I THOUGHT HER BRATHERWELL LOVE HER BUT THEY USEDHER AND RAPED HER. FOR ME I LOVE MY ONLY SIS AND THINK OF HER LIKE THES EVER. U JUSTUS THE MEN VERY SIK AND ANIMALES ((( TRY NOT TO USE DIRTY WORD LIKE [[SLUT]]

Will the commenter below

please press the 'OFF' button and go and tell mommy or daddy that the safelock isn't working on the computer. That's a good boy.
Sorry ANordoc I haven't actually read the story(visitor from LW,GS,EX&V etc.) but just noticed the lost kid on the Feedback Portal. Scary ain't it...Mancelt.

MY MIND WENT THU A RANGE OF PANIC , RAGE @ SIK

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what the

if the brothers would of acted like brothers instead of assholes, this would of been so much better, damn at least act like you your human

rape is not erotic

you are a sick fuck rape will never be anything but against the law I hope you get arrested asshole

hey....i liked it...

sometimes u gotta take a story for what it is and i liked it....and speaking as a person who has been raped....sometimes it is just hot...

Loved this one. It would have been better if she was a total virgin. Or maybe if her brothers invited friends to help out.

Loved it.

More chapters please! Maybe have them tie her up.

you sick bastard

Not hot, not erotic, just nasty, the sick outpourings of a sick and degenerate mind. I hope to fuck you get gang-raped until you have a fucking size 19 asshole, then you can write about how enjoyable rape is from your own experience. Burn in hell, you fucking animal.

Pretty good.

I know this is an old story and the author probably isn't even around anymore, but I just had to stop by and say that I liked this. I'm not a huge fan of double penetration, but it seemed to fit well with the story, and wasn't just thrown in because "Hey, wouldn't that be hot." I feel like the girl being a virgin is amazingly played out in stories here, but since I know it's viewed as "hot" I can see why it was included.

And while I hate to white knight it up, especially on an old story like this, but to the people who are complaining about the elements of non-consent in this story, you are all adults, no one forced you to read this, and if that isn't your cup of tea, then you probably should have done a better job of picking a story instead of complaining about it.

Really liked this story

Good story do you have the rest of the two weeks ready?