get hard over the finale
Brother eats sister and fucks her in a limo and then serves up her worst enemy on an operating table. What fantasies are made of!!
Great writing. Nice style and mechanics. It'll be interesting to see where this one takes us.
... but this is so intrequing that I have to read the next chapter. Very good so far ... plot, mechanics, pacing, romance, and suspense. Hope the rest is as good or better!
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A cruel tale--Hope no one here sick enough to
get hard over the finale
Sounds good to me!!
Brother eats sister and fucks her in a limo and then serves up her worst enemy on an operating table. What fantasies are made of!!
Enticing!
Great writing. Nice style and mechanics. It'll be interesting to see where this one takes us.
Not a fan of brutality, generally ,,,
... but this is so intrequing that I have to read the next chapter. Very good so far ... plot, mechanics, pacing, romance, and suspense. Hope the rest is as good or better!
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