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Phantom of Literotica

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous07/03/07

HI FREDDIE

How did you know,PHANTOM 4231, yet another great story,look out ,because i have just signed up to Literotica .I will see what I can do,have a job to outstrip you ,but then who knows.I will tell you one thing ,there will be no filth from me,erotic yes and humorous BUT NO FILTH.

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by WhiteWave4807/05/07

Clever intrigue

A most intriguing story in such an interesting setting. Erotic too, exploring the idea of fantasy as part of the physical self. When you used the present tense in the final paragraphs, was your intention to blend the Literotica ghost's writings with the 'real' events involving Trish at that point?

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