idk i mean its good. but i just wouldn't forgive him so quickly. he loves her? great! but she was JUST gang molested with his approval. i would be pissed for at least a week. probably more.
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Anonymous05/16/11
well....
Your stories are good, but I don't like how you make you characters fall in love and forgive the person who raped them.
English
Ooo, nice*
I justread these two back to back! Are you going to continue it? or will it just be these two chapters?
The End?
Hope this isn't the end. Felt the parts were a little rushed. Wish they were longer. Solid fives both. Not enough peroid stories on Lit.
ehh
idk i mean its good. but i just wouldn't forgive him so quickly. he loves her? great! but she was JUST gang molested with his approval. i would be pissed for at least a week. probably more.
well....
Your stories are good, but I don't like how you make you characters fall in love and forgive the person who raped them.
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