All Comments on 'Betrothed Ch. 04'

I can't believe it....All that buliding up.....Too short,too short,too short.....When I first started reading it I was soo hooked. I thought WOW this is going to be a good story but this last chapter is truly disappointing...

Oh the possibilities....

Love the story, please continue!

love the story so far...please continue!!

I dont think ive enjoyed a story here this much in a while!! Its captivating!

Yes, I loved this story at first but am dissapointed. You took the short way out. More details are needed.

Also, the vocabulary is too modern for the seting.

Okay, you left plausible believability far behind once again. There's no way in hell that the two sons of a Duke would be out on the ocean alone in a boat. You're walking into the realm of the absurd again just like when you wrote about an 8 year old girl having boobies.

Don't you realize that half of the kingdom would have taken up searching for the body. Too far fetched, so you get 2/5.