It was perfect. It had the perfect format with not too long of paragraphs and nice flowing sentences. It had a great storyline that was very hott and really got me going. I am not sure if you decided to do a second chapter to this but I sure hope you do because I would be really interested to read it. Great Job! A really hott and well written story!
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Delicious!
Thank you for a delicious and well crafted story. I am now all hot and bothered!
Wow is all I can say!
It was perfect. It had the perfect format with not too long of paragraphs and nice flowing sentences. It had a great storyline that was very hott and really got me going. I am not sure if you decided to do a second chapter to this but I sure hope you do because I would be really interested to read it. Great Job! A really hott and well written story!
Cute line....
"The sex would be her tip." .....I chuckled at the bikini with the hat and shirt as her work attire, but I enjoyed the story. Good luck.
Hot damn!
Great little yarn! Like the work uniform too.
Woo-hoo TX, darlin' !
The next time you're going to write a story this hot, you're going to have to visit the Midwest to take care of the "aftereffects." ;-)
Hell yea
Great story, reminded me of tara reid
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