by Lady Malachite
The realism of it is what makes it so hot, but also makes the ending so dis-spiriting. Things like this just shouldn't end that way!
Hot and full of gritty realism. Pain and lust, anticipation and climax, and the horror that we all fool ourselves in the name of things we cannot name.
Now that was probably one of the best things I've ever read on this site.I've been trying to dabble into poetry lately but I just can't seem to make it work--not like this. They'll be on my site but I will probably post some here. How do you do it?
Now that was probably one of the best things I've ever read on this site.I've been trying to dabble into poetry lately but I just can't seem to make it work--not like this. They'll be on my site but I will probably post some here. How do you do it?
Very poetic...nice rythmn..nice use of words without being crude.could easily find its way into mainstream poetry magazines....Well done..lets have another one.
could have been quicker, but still staggered. TK U MLJ LV NV