Good storyline but toooooooo shorts
Too many wannabe erotic pieces depend on an improbability for the story line. Once past the MAJOR improbability, the rest hung together.
Story seemed to caputure what it would be like for a serving table. Good imagination (it was imagination wasn't it?)
Loved it - just plain fun, well written and sexy. Great!
Will there be a sequel?
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Good storyline
Good storyline but toooooooo shorts
Well crafted!
Too many wannabe erotic pieces depend on an improbability for the story line. Once past the MAJOR improbability, the rest hung together.
Suprise ending!
Story seemed to caputure what it would be like for a serving table. Good imagination (it was imagination wasn't it?)
Now that was fun!
Loved it - just plain fun, well written and sexy. Great!
Wonderful piece
Will there be a sequel?
Click here to leave your own comment on this submission! or
Back to Breakfast Buffet Babe or
More submissions by Candell.