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MISSED OPPORTUNITY
Typical dumb son doesn't know enough to nail his mom first before his 'bud' gets her. He should've been waiting for her in her bedroom to pick up where Sean left off.
On second thoughts maybe he'll get used to 'sloppy seconds'.
You gotta be kidding
Imagination is a wonderful thing. Fiction can be. But you'd have the reader believe a young stud athlete would sit idly by and allow an "outsider" to nail his mom? Gimme a break here.
Our hero is too stupid to know the consequences of the taping of his mother? Our hero is too interested in gleaning masturbatory fantasies to kick the shit out of Sean when his mother kept saying "No"? Our young stud hero isn't enraged by the "bet"?
In olden times, one would toss eggs and assorted overly ripe vegetables at no talent actors. Too bad it can't be done over the net.
Fiction can be fun. In this case, it wasn't!
Batter up
Hope there's going to be a second part, it's time for Josh to bat.
Next Batter
Great story! Sounds like the whole team will get a bat?? Keep writing.
Very Good
I think it could have been better if the son had told his mother about the bet and she teased the shit out of Sean but never put out for him. Mean while she fucked the son and all his other friends.
hit a nerve
apparently you've hit a nerve with a couple of the readers, but the story is well crafted, well thought out, punctuation was right-on, had a logical flow, and that's enough to merit a 100 rating. and i beg to differ with 'you gotta be kidding. just because sonny is a jock does not necessarily mean that he's going to jump in and defend mommie's honor. let's remember, he, too, has an appreciation of his mother's body. and while the author doesn't say it outright, we are able to read that he'd like some of mom's pussy, too. and suppose he does decide to interrupt, this would have been extremely embarrassing for his mother. no, he made the right decision, even if it was difficult for him. and i might add, that this scenario is not that far from reality. i fucked my friends mother while he was in the next room, drunk. she proceeded to lecture us both on drinking. when the lecture was ended, he went off to bed, and i went to the bathroom. when i exited she wasn't through talking. one thing led to another, and it wasn't long before she pulled her panties off and straddled me. she, like our storied mom, willingly opened her legs and sank down on the stiffy. and yes, she gave me a new appreciation for older women that i have not forgotten to this day. and it wasn't the only time either. she liked it, as did i. now if in the sequel the our author has the son slamming his mother from behind, well, that's probably more fantasy then reality. but in real life, sometimes guy do watch or know that their mother is getting fucked by their friend(s). and yes, truth be known, they'd like some of momma's pussy, too.
good but...
being a guy if i wanted my mom and some clown ass friend of mine wanted her too and i knew about it i'd kick his ass especially when the camera came into play or at least rough him up and break his phone before he got it out cool story tho just a tad unbelievable from the male athlete perspective
Hmmm!!
Good story, and I do agree to some of what stonemo says. Now Josh should tell Sean that he (Sean) wasn't the only one that did some taping.
"Telling" Sean that it should be worth about $5,000 dollars to him (Sean) for Josh NOT to show the video to Josh's DAD, that is if Sean DOESN'T want the dad coming after Sean's ASS.
Josh should also confront his mom about him seeing her (WILLING) letting Sean fuck her, and asking her " Just what do you think DAD would say or DO if he were to find out"? Anyhoo good story..
Good Story
I think its a good story.Looking forward to more of it.
Very Good
A very good start to a good story. Looking forward to more about that hot mom. It sure brought back some memories. I had a simular experience with my friends mom.
Waiting here for more.
Great
Cant wait for part 2
Great story
I am really looking forward to the story continueing. Keep up the hot work
Grand Slam
No offense but this is the first story of yours I liked, I think you have a great story here, one that can be continued in many different directions. I added you to my favorites and you show a lot of promise, can't wait for the next chapter.
More?
I really liked this story, but it needs a second part to it...badly. What happens with Sean and the video, does he come back for more, do some other kids use the video for some leverage...MUST have a second part.
Whats next
Now the guy who lost the bet gets the video. Now its his turn. Great story keep it going with his friends to. she becomes their slut and dresses and does what she's told!!!!
more please
please post up part 2 this is a great story
update
Gotta get out part 2 love this story
Excellent start to a series
Really enjoyed your characters and the believable dialogue. You have set the stage for a great series. Keep mom off-balance.
good
update soon its a good story
More
This is good I'm looking forward to more
Unbelievably Hot
I love thesetype of stories and it went along at a perfect pace and was very realistic. Loved it. There needs to be more, more , more...start writing!!!
loved it
update soon its a good story
loved it
update soon its a good story
Update soon please
Man I liked it alot update soon please
Good
nice very good hope u write another chapter
Fantastic story
Really great story. Made me really hot. Love the idea of a mother being overcome with horniness and fucking like a teenager on a date. Hope there is part two somewhere down the line.
Great story
God I hope you update soon
Unrealistic
It seems unrealistic that the son would alllow one of his not so close friends attempt to sleep with his mom for a bet, when usaully he is protective of her
More
Can't wait for part 2
update
I'm looking forward to more
Great story
update soon please
Great story
Man you gotta do a part 2
Update soon please
Very good I hope you update soon
This needs a second part bad
My god what a great story please update soon
Great story
update soon please
good
this really needs a part 2
loved it
Really looking forward to a part 2
nice
looking forward to part 2
I hope you continue
I really hope you keep up this great story
Great story
Man this was hot how about part 2
Great story
update soon please
good
please update soon
more please
Really looking forward to a part 2
nice
needs a part 2
Really good
keep up the good work cant wait for part 2
Nice
loved it hope to see more
this was great
Liked it alot hope you continue the story
Keep Going
Please Please continue
what are you waiting for?
this is great
Nice
keep up the good work
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