Home Run

Very good hope to see more

This was one of the best I have read so far. Please continue

More, More

You have just got to give me more, please.

Tough Talk

Use of locker room language is not sexy. Calling breasts a "rack" is red neck English. Suggest the author learn to write for literate people. We don't all live in Tennessee.
Most of the descriptions are turn-offs.

This was hot

Not bad red neck language or not it was good. Calling breasts a rack or tits is just what a 18 yr old kid would say.

good

Where's part 2

hope you continue

Cant wait to see what happens next

Lets hear more of the story

Dont finish there please continue the story.

Nice

Nice
Where's part 2

i dont just get it

how could you sit back and watch a peer of yours that you dont even like seduce your mother to win a $500.00 bet. i just dont get it

Did you quit?

I hate to see a story this good go unfinshed

Good

I see this story has been here for awhile its too bad theres no second part I enjoyed it. I hope you get around to updating.

UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!

Come on quit being lazy

Good

I'd like to see more

More, please

It is a shame that this author does not have more stories on the site.

Great story but!

I think you should have had her son catch this guy outside the house. Take his camera and kick the shit out of him. He will be the laughing stock of the school now, and mom will be fucking everybody under fear of the video being sent to her husband.........
How about a follow up?

Thanks,
George

Home Runb

One of the BEST MILF stories I have read so far. Fantastic! -

Make a sequel

dude your a good writer, you should make more

Good to see you updated

I wish you'd put up the second part to this story

not good

Boring and unrealistic.

what a whore and wimpyass son

when parent don't respect their kids,the kids disrespect the parent.mom cross the line.son should tell mom he going to tell dad and see what her reaction is.

I liked it

Good Milf story hope to see part 2

Fantastic

I hope you update this story next time. Not that I didn't enjoy Ivy league but I hope to see part 2 of this soon.

Good

Needs a update bad

C'mon already

When are you going to give us part 2

Good

This is just to offer encouragement that you take up the story again. Quite a number of people enjoy it, and I've returned to read it more than once. Give it some thought, if you will.

Nice

Update already!!!!!

I like this story alot

I hope you update soon its been too long

I enjoyed this

Dont keep us waiting please give us the next part

Hey

You ever gonna give us part 2?

wow

god damn, there must be more!

Great

Hope you update soon please

This is great

but you need to give us the next part

another home run

Are we gonna see a sequel to this story. it would be nice to see if she invites Sean back for a return encounter

Ok

Its been like 2 years can we see what happens next?

WTF

Sucks cause it isnt finshed left us hanging

Next?

more

this is going to have to br the best story on this site. all ur stories rock the shit but this is def the best. hopin for new shit.

dissappointed

yep, im really dissappoint in the son. i was really hopeing he would have positioned himself in a way to confront sean as he left and taken the phone from him. the rest was great. on another note, im pissed at the mom for being a cheat on the husband so damn easyily. i could understand if the husband is rarely home but he only leaves like this not very often and yet she feels neglected enough to do this with sean? what a whore.....sorry, im a cuckhold victim myself, so that little tid bid grated on me. although...its like a dark attraction for me it seems.

weird idea, well done

I think it would've been better with a twist at the end where the son somehow gets the cell phone. unless this is going to turn into a series where his friend blackmails the mother into repeated sessions!

good one

more..........

good

a sequel asap, pls

very good

Need a part two...need to see what Sean is going to do with the pictures...maybe a little blackmail....

Great story

I would go a different way though now. Have him meet Sean outside....kick his ass and take his phone. Sean loses his bet and is powerless. he confronts his mom and he now holds all the cards

Ahhhhh ok!

That was some story. Myself I think the son checking out mom was a little much to swallow. But for the most part it was a good story.

Dear Sa2222,

This is one of the best erotic stories I have ever read. Putting aside the scenario I love the slow work up, the characters, detailed and no-bullshit sex scenes. It's like watching an elobarate dance how she tries to scoop her honey pot away and he tries to bury himself in. But the scenario, well I hate you for giving me a new fetish but I admit I love it.

Anyways I'm writing this comment because I noticed you've favourited a recent story so you still must be lurking. I made an account just for this comment. So Sa2222, could you just get off your butt and write another story along this lines please? Even one page? Pretty please?

Sincerely, your no 1 fan.

Awesome

Will u EVER continue this? PLEASE!

This story needs a part two.

With the son indeed confronting Sean but with a twist. Have Sean lose the bet on purpose before he confronts him. He lost the bet cause he actually fell for the Mother. Allow Sean to be smart enought to know the son know's about the bet and admit he was doing it at first to humilate him. But now he actually loves her and to humilate him would humilate her and that he could not do.

Have him tell the mother of his friend everything and have her pissed at first. he kept after her until he forgave him but not till after she is seduced by her own son in her vunerable time.

In the end let her get pregnant by either Sean of her son. Let a revelation come out that the husband had a secret vasectomy during a business trip which leads to huge fight cause she wanted more children; but then she cheated on him. (both are wrong and both mad at each other for different reasons). Let the divorce happen but on irreconcilable differences (who wants to admit his wife was seduced by an 18 year old?). Then let the father fume as the mother (now ex wife) marry Sean right before the child is born telling everyone (figuretively) he was cuckold by a mere boy.

If your sequel (if there is one) has all that then I would give it a 5.

As for this story I already gave it a 5.

John

Good Story

Your character development in this story is outstanding.
I don't understand why you didn't continue it. Perhaps you got bored with the conceptionalization, whatever the reason have you ever pondered the idea of having several different take off stories from this lead story? It has a lot of potential. Your authorship skills are equal to the best on this site. Thanks for your effort.

Just great

The way you slowly made her comply was great.

Please write a part 2

continue, please, continue.