All Comments on 'How I Popped My Mom's Cherry'

Ha, fun stuff! Like the concept. I mean, the idea of having an incestuous relationship with the woman you've been closest to all your life is always a turn-on. However, when you have sex with any woman whose cherry you hadn't taken, there's always that little, jealous, nagging voice from the primitive parts of our brains that thinks "she's not fully mine, someone else has been with her." Not very PC, but there to some degree, and thus almost by definition puts that "stain" on the idea of loving one's own mother. So this was a nice change-up.

As far as any criticisms go, it felt a little long on narration & short on dialogue. But only a little. Also wish the story'd been drawn out more, but then I have a preference for stories longer than is standard for this forum, so guess that complaint isn't necessarily relevant.

All-in-all, nice fun diversion, my friend. Well done!

Khyran Leander

virgins you really need an anatomy lesson--Try the dictionary

You dropped out of 10 grade, I take it. At least that's the impression you're giving from your writing

Never mind these grade school amatures. I know what I like and that's a hot story. They should just stick to Barney the purple Abortion that's all they are fit to read. Great story keep up the excellent work.

It would've been more believable if she didn't give birth to the guy. Stopped reading after finding out she gave birth, which means...

Keep it going, don't stop now.Mom sounds really hot and horny.

Keep it going, don't stop now.Mom sounds really hot and horny.

Good Story,all going say cause well that all think matter to u if ppl think ur story is good or bad.Im simple person with simple needs :P

I much rather fuck my sister then my mom sadly i dont have sister :P

A good story. Well written. Some nice twists, mom being a virgin. Good explanations for how it happened. But, does the security system "save" everything it sees. Or was your mother watching her parents at a young age? Your grand parents seem to have been into a little incest fantasy themselves. I wish your mother had had some dialog in the story, want to know her feelings about this. Keep writting, you're very good. But proof read the parts where you were stroking your cock as you wrote, some spelling errors.haha

great story. good writing very good story. only wish there had been another part to finish it off.

Maybe she should have had a test tube baby to make it more believable

i got mom preg. been fucking her for over 20 years started when she caught me and sis fucking yes i fuck my aunt to my mom`s sis they all like my 9 inche penis

Wonderful story. I thought it was really clever. Keep up the good work.

I am so happy I found this story again. The first time I read it, but than I could not find it i have been looking for this story for years.

Some people just don't pay attention to what they read. There was an apt description of how I popped my mom's cherry but they think I made it up or don't know my anatomy. I think they need to go back to school.

This story would be fine except for the fact that there is no way the kid's mom would have a hymen. That would have gone away when she had him unless she had a C-section.

do you still fuck her because at some point i want in your incest and we could have a threesome

Obviously you did not read the whole story, he did say his mother gave birth to him via a c-section, thus her hymen would still be intact.

BUT BULLSHIT, YOUR MOM WENT TO COLLAGE, AND NEVER GOT FUCKED. HOWS KIDDING HOW . NEVER USED A DILDO TO MASTURBATE. IS SHE A SAINT. WHO EXERCISED ALL THE TIME. AND STILL HAD HER CHERRY. WAKE UP YOUR DREAMING. A GOOD STORY , BUT JUST THAT.IT'S ONLY YOUR FIRST TRY , SO TRY AGAIN NEXT TIME IT MAY WORK. NOT YET A FAN MAYBE NEXT TIME. LAROC OF AGES

This reads like an autobiography. I actually forgot I was reading an "incest" story. Perhaps you should focus on non -erotics.

hey Laroc... if you want to bust balls about story writing, why don't you learn to spell first ? and speak English ! your grammar sucks ass

. . . if you think a baby can get past a hymen without tearing it to shreds, you don't know damn all about the human body. Granted a woman can get pregnant with out much in the way of intercourse, but when a 8 to 10 pound baby wants out, a little skin ain't gonna stop it, and it won't grow back, either. And while nipple sucking is fun for the man, it often results in a breast infection for the woman, which is no fun for her!

C-Section would preserve the Hymen.

Good story line only to be ruined by poor grammar. Two stars only. Keep trying

Right off, several words about the 'Comments'-- of the Commenters! It is very obvious that many (so-called) "readers" have NOT read the story!! At least three of the prior comments, before my current comments, mentioned that the mother would have to (I'm paraphrasing) "have a C-section in order for her hymen to still be intact", and other variations of the paraphrased quotes! What imbiciles! It's no wonder that many writers on this and other pornography sites get discouraged, by idiotic comments but worse yet is that the imbicles hardly if at all read the story/stories!!!!

As for 'tiger96' and his first (and only) Posted story here on Literotica, and possibly even his first writing ever, the story is better than fine in the category of Mother and Son Incest. In fact, for me the story is very good, in that 1) they appear to have an unshakeable faith and love for ONLY each other (for me, requirements for incest); and, 2) the story is an ultimate winner for me--FIVE Stars--because the incestual female, the mother in this story, agreeably and with forethought, got pregnant, and thus bearing several children with her son, and another on the way!!

So!! My suggestions are thus; 1) Readers should actually have read the story before opening their keyboard (aka mouth) and proving they're an idiotic imbicle; and 2) 'tiger96', please continue to write about blood-related incest--ignore the comments of those that apparently didn't even read the story, probably from ignorance and not being able to "understand the King's language"--English!!!!!

It is not physiologically possible for a woman to have given birth normally, and then 18 years later lose her hymen, if it ever even existed; that pompous asslicker Bigdaddyg123 needs to learn some basic biology instead of pushing his own ignorance as though it were established fact. Women cannot give birth without shredding their hymen (if they even had one to begin with) and hymens don't grow back, so fuck off you imbecile (note the correct spelling) and blow your pissy, sickly sweet, fawning comments out your ass; who knows, you may even grow a hymen of your own up there, so you can shove your head back up your ass and take your cherry all over again.You're a fucking idiot........

You know, I think some people here are not reading and paying attention and some others are getting entirely too worked up. Yes, the author needs a semester studying English Grammer and Composition and he also needs to get him/herself a good proofreader. No arguements there because it is the truth. Calling names is not good form here as it is not necessary - the faults here in the story and commentators are obvious. Another point I'd like to make. Mother, here, DiD actually have a C-section birth according to the story. So, in theory her hymen could still be intact however unlikely. It is possible that the Father's sperm ejaculated outside her body and certainly her hymen could cross that barrier and impregnate her, though that is very unlikely. It is possible that Mother could have had a C-section birth and therefore her hymen could be intact until her son was old enough to pierce it, though again very unlikely. There are many other ways besides penetrative vaginal sex for a woman to have broken her hymen at any point in time all the way from infancy to adulthood. Almost any vigorous activity could do it and according to her son Mother is/was somewhat of an athlete. This author does not need to be discouraged, but just the opposite. From the dialogue on the video of the Grandparents, I wonder if Mother was actually in possession of an intact hymen when her son took her. Could Grandfather have been the actual father of this boy and then simply given the boy a story about a non-existant father when he grew old enough to ask questions? This is a pretty good read, but does need some work. But the previous commentors need some work also.

Great story and except for a couple of things that most writers include in their stories, it would have been a five and not a four star. Too many shaved pussies, especially on older females, and on the mother's body size 'DD' boobs would cause her to look like a stripper who visited the implant station for a boob job. Unless you have a very oversized female, or implants, boobs aren't normally that large. Sorry, but it is becoming worse as each story I read seems to dwell on these two items.

really enjoyed this thank you

OUTSTANDING, PLEASE GIVE US MORE LIKE THIS ONE.

GOOD STORY. NEEDS SOME CLEANING UP TO BE GREAT!!

"How I Popped My Mom's Cherry:" - This is the second time I've read this story, since "over 6 years ago." The only reason it's been so long is that I did not check "My Favorites" menu. I'm more awed this second time than I was when I first read it. A note or two (2) about some of the comments--I'll not reduce my dignity to comment about the writer's of the comments, other to say I'm disturbed that so many comments confirm those "readers" did not read the story. Their comments prove the point as they made false arguments that were not present in the story.

The writer 'tiger96' did an amazing job--a great effort--providing we readers of an awesome story. The theme is very unique, very elaborate and we enunciated. There are some slight usage of incorrect---though not misspelled--words, i.e., "know" vs "now", "one" vs "on," etc. Spell checking will not pick up those words; only an eagle-eye editor will catch those oversights.

Since this story was posted July 2007, almost fourteen (14) years ago, and one (1) favorite author/story, this writer has been on "hiatus" of some sort. That's TOO bad. I'm thrilled with this story and the writer's ability to provide a story that pumped and gassed up my libido!! It has lots of my favorite, incest choices in a mother and son sexual context. In addition, I do not find any story or theme factors that are not conceivable nor impossible. There could have been more backdrop, back ground, biography information, but those missing details do not detract from the story theme! Again, a fabulous story; the writer has earned my accolades for this effort!!

"How I Popped My Mom's Cherry:" - There are some commenters her, and elsewhere, that should never have- or probably didn't, graduated from Junior High School. I'm not gonna waste my time elaborating on the elementary garbage mouths and words. One, thing I will say, is that "Literotica" should not allow Anonymous comments.

As one reader's comments asserted, this story is somewhat short, which could have been expanded with much more dialogue between Mother and Son. Dialogue, talking and/or banter, etc. adds to the context of the story; also there is more adventurous excitement knowing how the characters feel about each other, each act and/or situation they may find themselves, and the reader feels more closeness to the characters.

We're not sure if anything untoward has happened to 'tiger96' be I certainly hope not. Given that, as with most reader's of this story, additional writings but be very welcomed. The concept and theme of this story--true or not--is an excellent idea. So, there's merit in the thought that he or she has abilities to get readers reading, and the juices (of all kinds) flowing. Thanks for a great read!!

"How I Popped My Mom's Cherry:" - Today (in fact tonight) is 03 April 2024. In July, three months from now, it will have been seventeen years since 'tiger96' wrote this initial (and only) story on 'Literotica". For we incest/taboo genre story lovers, it's been to damned long. Again, I'll express my hope that nothing nor untoward has occurred in his life.

As I do many times before I read stories that I really like, I'll read the comments...as I have read the thirty-three comments preceding this comment. Again, as I've done in each of the three times I read and commented on this story, many--for the lack of another word--"readers" don't actually READ the stories.. Possibly twenty percent (20 %) of the "readers" have/had erroneous comments about the concept of Mother's virginity being taken by her own naturally son.

A word to the writer/author 'tiger96' about the incorrect word "shoot" was used--twice--instead of the correct word "shot". There were some other minor discrepancies but nothing to squabble about. The theme, concept and descriptive aspects of the plot and theme is good. Although, this being a site for stories, rather than narratives, this story did not have sufficient dialogue to cause this reader, and I'm sure many other readers, to have familiarity nor form any real-life attachments, to the mother and son characters.

Although, since it appears that writer/author 'tiger96' won't offer any additional story/stories, I would be remiss to not at least encourage him to write another...or more!