An enjoyable piece done with taste, stopping at the right places. Good luck!
Now where is the camera?
How exciting it was to read your piece. You managed to communicate the blossoming of a women who has come to find her beauty and the appreciation she has for her discoverer.
A beautifully woven fantasy, written with taste.
This was beautifully written! :o) Great insight Hon.
Insightful, lovely story. I think its my favorite of what you have posted so far, though the one about the masqurade is up there too.
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