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Bravo!
Your choice of background was perfect. I loved how it almost seemed like the musak heard from the speakers at cash lane 4.
Plastic or paper?
Carrie.
poetry forum
i mentioned this submission in the New Poem Review thread in the Poetry Forum. please feel free to come along and join in with other poets - wildsweetone
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The rhyme is fun and the poem is just so cute! I hope if there is an Elaine, that you gave her the poem. Secretly of course.
Really well done
Very funny, superbly read, and with great production values. I see there's a story that goes with this (or, more properly, this goes with the story). Fabulous job.
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A really fun
no
hilarious set of
love notes that
nearly did me
in
as cookies and granolas were
snuck in.
Funny and really well written!
You made me laugh so hard I was gasping. And the production work on the audio is really professional. We made you the first recipient of the Poetry Forum welcome wagon. That means you got a bunch of 5-votes and this feedback. (Yes, we're strange but well-meaning. If you want to join in the madness, stop by the poetry forum). :-)
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