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Can You Help Me With My Bra?

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by Anonymous07/09/07

Wow!!!

Wow!!! That was some mighty powerful story-telling. Brings back memories of my unfortunately pre-marital good times. Please continue to tell about you and this ultra-hot nymph.

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by Anonymous07/09/07

Butt in real life

I loved your story and hope it was all fiction because In real life if she allowed you to go from one hole to the other would give her the worst infection she has ever had. The bacteria in the anus is one of the hardest infections to get rid of and she would be mad at your for life. If you want to go from hole to hole use a condom and remove it when in her pussy and put a new condom on when in her ass. As far as ass to mouth unless you like to eat shit I wouldn't suggest that either because that can cause you to get anything from the common cold to hepitis.

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by Anonymous07/11/07

At the start...

you began in third person narrative but quickly switched to first ... best to stick to one only unless you're clearly switching narrators.

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by Anonymous07/19/08

Great Story, Third Person Read

The story was fantastic! In the third person though, at times it was hard to just read without focus on the story.

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