by sweethomealabama
I loved it. Hope you develope it some more.....other people..maybe incest.... maybe swinging...who, but you, knows.
Very well-written and very erotic! Your descriptions were so detailed and sensuous, too. Can't wait for the next depraved installment!
This was by far the best I have read here in months if not forever. The detail you used was perfect.
I can wait for more and more.
My congratulations to you - On Count One - a story that contains no errors of language or typing that ruin so many otherwise glorious stories on this forum.
On Count Two - a story that demonstrates how rigid adherance to the edicts of the Bible of the Christian Church shows the hypocrisy of a God that gives humans the pinnacle of pleasure that can be enjoyed in sexual activity and then make the enjoyment of that activity a sin punishable by Hell for all eternity.
My hearfelt congratulations to you Alabama!