All Comments on 'Tropical Paradise'

On a scale of 1 to 5, deserves at least a 6! I'm looking forward to the next installment when Chappie joins the fun.

OMG!!! What a hot story! It got me so hard and dripping pre-cum. I have never had a true man/man experience. Your story got me so hot I found myself wishing it was my ass Marc was filling!

Please tell me there is more to come!

great story - love the internal struggle the sailor goes through before lust takes him.

Awesome story!! I'm straight and I came reading it, makes me want to join the navy!! Can't wait for part two!

I hope this is the start of a Thai erotic vacation series. I am mostly straight but stories like this turn me on.

that is the best gay storie ive ever read ive been thinking about being with a guy for real i need marc bad im so ready after reading your story thanks really i came so hard

I like your style....

This was awonderful story. I haven't checked, but I hope there is or will be a part two. The only thing I did'nt like was the big dicks. BTW, I am straight, I thought.

This story was great!! HOT and sweet! Please write more and include Chappy!!!

Please continue you truly have a talent for writing.

I'll be looking for your stories.

Please give us part 2 ASAP that was so good. Im straight but the story left me wishing someone would FUCK my ass

Great Story Please write Part 2 (wish I was Getting Fucked by Marc)

You created a beautiful story. Phuket, eh?

I hope you finish the next three days!!!

Why was Chappie brought into it, it would of been so much better if she was left out of it.

Love your both stories, having been to Thailand while I was in the Navy I had some goodtimes with the boys and ladyboys.

This story is so well crafted, but what I loved most is the build up... the anticipation, as without it, erotic lit is nothing... as in, will they or won't they... what will be the turning point. I was sssssso there... I wanted to be John.... I'll come back to this story again.

What can I say but Amazing, hot, erotic, sensual, sexy, teasing and sperm producing. Loved the detail and the "edging" as we gently moved through the tantalizing stages of this love making. Suggest a continuation were in Chappie returns the next morning and serves them breakfast on the terrace next to the hot tub.............................take it from there Eroticpen69.