All Comments on 'Susannah Demands Attention'

...a "Loving Wife" story about a loving wife. Loses a few points for its brevity, but a good, solid entry (ahem).

not much story, but it is quite erotic. refreshing to read a Loving Wife story that is about the sexual activity of a wife and a husband and nobody else.

...when I read, "Her eyes began to feel like bricks." I have no idea what the writer meant by this, but it was so off the wall, I knew the rest of the story wasn't worth my time.

May humbly recomend that this loving wife buy herself a few bits of sexy clothing and a couple erotic DVD's and read a couple of dozen stories on this site. Variety is after all the spice of life.

Apart from all that quite subtle little piece.

Hitchhiker

Would have given you a higher rating if this had been

two or three pages longer...........

Not quite full marks because of the length (pun not intended) of the story and the change in direction. However, you gained marks because the wife initiated sex with her husband- would have been nice if the husband had made some comment or a sleepy "Don't stop now!!!" Thanks.

"He was always well endowed." ** Does that mean that it's possible that someone might not always be well endowed. That one day it's nine inches, and the next it's five?

Her eye lids were as heavy as bricks = she was tired.<P>

I liked the story of a loving wife and the tired cock of large proportion which didn't need to be did it writer.<P>

No wimps or cucks or cheating but a deplorable period between her rapes of him. Poor guy. Nice work and thanks.

Taking issue with the other commentors, I thought the brevity of the story was what made it successful. The whole episode didn't take long, but it told us al we needed to know to understand the relationship - and life - of the protagonists.

Nicely done.

Please - could we get more! People's pallets are numbed by over doses of sluts plus vindictive or wimpish husbands etc etc. It's ok for part of the time fantasies. But it is nice like cool breeze to get a brief sketch of a story with no villains. Just one weekday's night of one couple. More, yes?

One husband, one Loving Wife is always good.