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by Anonymous

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by 07/05/07

Good pacing

. . . that sets the mood. I like your description and with a little tightening up, this would be a even better poem.

I mentioned your poem in the Poetry Discussion and Feedback forum in my New Poem review: http://forum.literotica.com:81/showthread.php?p=23 285667#post23285667

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by Velvet_Relay07/06/07

I remember that night

If they only knew what happened after I walked through that door ;) I love you & you REALLY need to write more!!

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by Anonymous03/28/13

breathless

Admittedly I only stumbled across your poem by accident and while I still picked myself up - I found myself being captured by words.

you have a talent.

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