All Comments on 'Squirt'

The funniest short I have read in a while. You do have a warped sense of humor, that's a good thing! Thanks for the laughs.

Great, funny little short. I love your conversational style, it works. Your opening line was catchy and draws one into the story. I LOVE good opening lines.

Very funny and in your usual inimitable style!!

You need help! But then you might not come up with this stuff.

Bitch of a problem. Great writing.

That first line is a grabber if I've ever saw one. Beyond that, I don't know what to say except well done *laugh*

Still chuckling Jenny. The first line grabs you and last line leaves you laughing.

MJL

You can pee over me anytime, Jenny!

A great read. The humor had a vicious bite to it that just made it just so much funnier. This was the shit... or the piss.

tight, well written and funny - good hook at the end

Very funny story. Your story really showed the frustration over your skill. He he.

went with a woman for a year or so who squirted - loved it - the taste is just delectable - love the humor in your writing.

just like the others have already made clear, thank you for that.

squirt!!!!!!!v vaginas are neat! i love stories about things that i perceive to be neat! five stars~!!!!!!! also write more stories about vaginas and if youcan matchbox cars i like those too!!!!! please include luke skywalker too. also.

First off, a waterproof mattress pad is necessary. Next, several very absorbent bath towels are useful. Finally, a long cock and a willing, hot pussy. Now let the fun begin. Be sure to wash the sheets.

Enjoyed it from the first sentence.

Hilarious!