Good story. All it needs now to make it a Great story is at least 1 more chapter. More chapters would be better, so much possibility's here.. Keep them coming!!!!!!
Paul
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Anonymous03/03/08
Incredibly Exciting
This was incredibly arousing. I loved it!!
by
Anonymous02/04/09
Brilliant
Needs more chapters 10/10
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Anonymous03/01/10
Like everyone else said, more chapters!
Loved it. =)
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Anonymous03/06/10
Stands on its own
Disagree with those who want more chapters. This stands on its own, very well balanced, good timing, discovery after discovery in a very short span of time. Going further would just be repetitive. Tom
P.S. I love your work.
English
I thought I only went to Mt Goat ID
Good story
WOW!!
Good story. All it needs now to make it a Great story is at least 1 more chapter. More chapters would be better, so much possibility's here.. Keep them coming!!!!!!
Paul
Incredibly Exciting
This was incredibly arousing. I loved it!!
Brilliant
Needs more chapters 10/10
Like everyone else said, more chapters!
Loved it. =)
Stands on its own
Disagree with those who want more chapters. This stands on its own, very well balanced, good timing, discovery after discovery in a very short span of time. Going further would just be repetitive. Tom
P.S. I love your work.
I came twice
That was a great story, I came twice to it
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