Somebody's Daughter

GOOD !

This is a well written story. This is the first submission that I've read but I'll go a look at some more of his postings.

He Got What He Deserved!!!

Good for her!!! Soldiering never gives a person the right to do whatever with the civilians of the region of conflict. That girl will forever hate the country represented by that self-centered ass of a so-called-soldier. Soldiers, sailors and airmen are some of the finest ambassadors ever to grace the globe, but it only takes one incident to destroy the efforts of many months, days, and years of good deeds. The guy in the story was treated rather kindly. Prof. Ramstein

He Got What He Deserved!!!

Good for her!!! Soldiering never gives a person the right to do whatever with the civilians of the region of conflict. That girl will forever hate the country represented by that self-centered ass of a so-called-soldier. Soldiers, sailors and airmen are some of the finest ambassadors ever to grace the globe, but it only takes one incident to destroy the efforts of many months, days, and years of good deeds. The guy in the story was treated rather kindly. Prof. Ramstein

dramatic

Great story line! Well written and free of the dreaded grammatical and spelling errors so frequently displayed. I too shall explore other examples of your writing. As to the professor, lighten up on the poltical commentary. This is a story not life! Robert

Great story...

it kept my attention until the very end and its a good job it did or I would have missed the twist at the end. Nicely done, thanks.

Ha!

OMG I loved it. What a hot intelligent story with a great twist. I don't normally like rape stories but this had the perfect ending.

I agree, but...

it's a good story with a moral. However the narrative could have been rounded off without the switch in POV at the end, which is awkward. How effective it would have been to have described the soldier's sensations and feelings as his victim takes her revenge. Also, how exactly did she get to him? It's not clear. A little more descriptive choreography is needed--even one sentence would do it. Best, Ken

wow

men deserve such treatment for obeying their cock and not their heart or mind.

Holt Orphanage

He got what he deserved. And Holt Orphanages are full of these raped victims' babies. It is too bad that the rape victim did not piss on him, as well after she stabbed him.

People need to read closer.

"He fought a battle between conscience and lust as he FANTASIZED about taking her. "

Everyone saying he got what he deserved need to read the story closer. The sexual action never actually took place. It was all in his head. The above line says so.

Good story though. Nice twist.

This is amazing

Even without the erotic element this story is amazing.
The anger of war-sexuality mash up was awesome;
"There was little sign of enjoyment on his face, which was screwed up with anger. The pleasure was all in hurting her."
I really am impressed to find such a literary gem among my quick fixes for rape-fetish cravings.

Was great until she started enjoying it; then it got great again when she killed him. That was completely out of the blue. :)

Wow!

This was incresible hott...got me so soaked! That's so bad... ;)

-Bizzy