All Comments on 'A Birthday Present Ch. 03'

It was getting good, hmm not now though. Jamie is getting sicker than Ella was. He DOESN'T love his sister, he wants to POSSESS her for his own sick fantasies.

What Ella should do is go along with all he wants till she is free to move around again, then go jump out an upstairs window. Leaving him a suicide note though.. Maybe I can score the next installment higher..

First time reading your stories not what i was exspecting at all

This is one sick puppy! I mean, really. The blow job from the doctor was the only good part of this chapter. Needs work. (Oh, and get some help. Seriously!!!)

It turned me on, maybe it's because I'm sick minded...and I love Sci-Fi.

The only thing is, I think Ella shouldn't be treated quite as badly, now that she's pregnant.

I'd love to see a sequel. :)

very nice turn of events i must say. I definitely enjoyed the turning against ella, nothing is as fun as being dominant to a dom.

Wow, u can't love someone if ur willing to do that to them.

what happened after that?

What happens next? The stories are too short!