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OK.
With you Inever really know when you are serious or not Fred,that is one of the things I DO LIKE,how about that?
Ignore the bashers.
Freddie, ignore the bashers. They are just jealous. My wife and I love you. We read everything you write.
And we loved this story. It is so you.
NOTHING LASTS FOR EVER
Freddie we all have fits of depression,this to shall pass.Dont you ever stop writing,you have no idea of the pleasure and laughs you have given me in the last few months.A time which has not been easy,Ithought it would never end,then I discovered a CHARACTER,BFW,I have not had a sad day since,really sincere thanks.I feel very sorry for those that cannot see life for the great adventure it is.
A thoughtful examination.
Interesting take on all things in general. Things we all think about from time to time. Points out the universal truth. "Time is Fleeting."
Who is BFW? Do we know him?
As usual, Freddie, you taunt us with the possibility of finding out who you really are. Maybe you're presenting us with realities, thinking we won't believe them in any case. What does it matter? This essay certainly teased me into thinking I was at one with you on many issues. It's all part of the sadness and wonder of being a human creature, along with so many others we'd like to care about but can't because there are too many of them out there to comprehend. It's mind-blowing. Thanks for writing this. It gave me the chance to focus on things I usually push to the back of my mind.
Gutt!
All those great stories and you also read Vonnegut... I give it (you) 2 thumbs up.
Wow
Why are you writing just here? You could whip Stephen King's ass with that submission. Two roads diverged in a yellow wood and you took the path less traveled.
Nice rant
Good flow, good rhythm. well done.
Why do I HAVE to leave a title?
Creating titles, there's something I don't like...but not what I wanted to leave a comment about. I thought this was great. Matches a LOT of my own views. And I wanted to leave you with this quote from "The Brak Show," which is sometimes on Cartoon Network: "Time is an abstract unit of measure created by carbon-based lifeforms to monitor their own decay." Thundercleese, the giant, life-form hating robot, said this.
keep em coming
I agree that you are of the calibre of one of the best modern life and day author. You are contemporary , yet futuristic. You are enligtening and elusive. You can get the ying and the yang. You should be published NOW. J K Rowling has nothing on you. Truck on my man someone will discover your talent and make you and him or her a lot of money.
At the risk of sounding cliche...
...I have to say I can really relate to what you've written here. You really put into words many of the thoughts and feelings that I have experienced. The feeling of insignificance, of knowing your nothing more then a little speck in a vast universe of other insignificant specks and wishing to be so much more. The feeling of looking in the mirror and feeling like the god of your own personal universe, where everything you say, do and feel is of the utmost importance and significance. The feeling of hating the concept and passage of time. The feeling of panic at the thought of my unavoidable, impending death and subsequent non-existance. Why do we look forward to the future? Why look forward to a time that brings you closer to death? I want so much to live for the here and now, but then the here and now is gone and I've done nothing with it. I waste so much time lamenting about the time I waste. I wonder what the purpose of anything is.
You are such a good writer and one of my favorite authors on Literotica.
Also, I detest fireworks. I had more then a few close calls and even a few (thnakfully) minor injuries from people setting off fireworks/firecrackers near me as a child and have been traumatized for life because of it. I'm glad I'm not the only firework-hating weirdo in the world.
And being stuck in a crowd of people makes me want to scream. All those people touching, bumping, rubbing, breathing, coughing, sneezing, shedding their dead hair and skin cells on me, near me, around me...*shudder* I feel ill just thinking about it. Oh, did I just come across as some sort of freaky germaphobe?
we're not so different, you and i
i love rants about human experiences, they're so fun. it makes us all feel connected in this big world when we can be so different.
and i hate it when people say "this too shall pass,"... i once had a teacher tell me that when they obviously didn't know what they were talking about. it never passes.
Good=Bad=and=Ugly
You do make a person stop and think,and I don't do that very often. Whats the use - only gets me down and as it is I hate people - places - and things. Thats why I live in the country where my only worry is - who is going to build on my road next. They are still 2 miles away - but I know they will be here before I can say good-bye. It is called progress and I am running out of places to move. With luck and my health going the way it is - maybe I won't have to worry about it much longer. There has to be a better place. Did like what you wrote though.........JAG
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