I know you didnt just leave us hangin like that. Glad to have you back cant wait to see if brian comes back.
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Anonymous07/14/07
too short
even for a chapter it's toooo short....
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Anonymous07/14/07
Unimpressed
I didn't like it. It seemed like you just remembered you had a story to finish and that this was the best you could do last minute. It was too short, too corny, and wayyyy too predictable. You're better than this.
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Anonymous07/15/07
Okay...
...but too short and a bit predictable at times.
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Anonymous07/15/07
I'm glad you're back
I've been waiting for more from you. I can't wait to see what happens next in this story! Keep up the good work.
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Anonymous07/23/07
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please dont wait too long to post the next submission. this was like a half-chapter and i need more Bryan and Mina!
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Anonymous10/11/07
good work but we need more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
i love this story so please top it up and finsh it with a good thing going. i very good start though, well done
English
Well done!
Glad to see you back at it!
No you didnt
I know you didnt just leave us hangin like that. Glad to have you back cant wait to see if brian comes back.
too short
even for a chapter it's toooo short....
Unimpressed
I didn't like it. It seemed like you just remembered you had a story to finish and that this was the best you could do last minute. It was too short, too corny, and wayyyy too predictable. You're better than this.
Okay...
...but too short and a bit predictable at times.
I'm glad you're back
I've been waiting for more from you. I can't wait to see what happens next in this story! Keep up the good work.
...
please dont wait too long to post the next submission. this was like a half-chapter and i need more Bryan and Mina!
good work but we need more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
i love this story so please top it up and finsh it with a good thing going. i very good start though, well done
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