I really loved the story, had me wet all day. I couldn't wait for my husband to get home just to I could take his bottom =-). The wife was way Cool in my book.
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Anonymous07/12/07
good only good
Very good hot and interesting story, but the author need a grammar checker program. If the errors in usage and spelling didn't turn me off, along with some bad grammar, this would be a 10/10 not an 8/10.
great story
I really loved the story, had me wet all day. I couldn't wait for my husband to get home just to I could take his bottom =-). The wife was way Cool in my book.
good only good
Very good hot and interesting story, but the author need a grammar checker program. If the errors in usage and spelling didn't turn me off, along with some bad grammar, this would be a 10/10 not an 8/10.
BTW think interracial is very very hot.
Great story...
Some additional editing would have made it even better.
It had me aroused and wishing my wife was here to bend me over!
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