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A Karate Love Story Ch. 01

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous07/18/07

More Please

I can't wait to read the rest of this story...!

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by Anonymous07/18/07

Can't wait

to see where this goes. So far so good.

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by 08/10/07

Good Beginning

Really like the story so far - can't wait to read more.

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by RogueLurker09/03/07

intrigued ...

A very nice set up of the characters - both Audra and the Sensei are likable and engaging (I know - Jack's the sexy one, but we'll have to wait till a later chapter to get to know him)and the details on the dojo flow smoothly, adding another layer of originality and interest to a well written story (or begining of a story). Looking forward to the next few chapters.

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