by FazilKotuk
Looking forward to additional installments and character development.
The Journey is the Story.
Nice start.....except for the bisexual part, you could have left that out....but where is the rest....it's been over a year! You should never start a story you can't finish...it makes us crazy!
I liked your intro to a story, but where's the rest? Don't listen to that comment about the bi thing. I think everyone is a little bi, but most people aren't confident enough in themselves to admit it to anyone, even them self.
you build up to a potential story but end it at that... wtf... where's the good stuff?!?
This is really good. You should write more of the story so we can see what he did before he took over the world. What kind of erotic things did he do to people? Did he ever try to hypnotize a bunch of people at the one time? How did he hypnotize everyone to become ruler of the world?