Absolutely great I loved it keep it up.
well writen, good storyline.. very few syntax errors... it's been a long time.. have you lost the need to write?... thank you for what you've given already
boring and totally unrealistic. more effort required
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Absolutely great I loved it keep it up.
well done
well writen, good storyline.. very few syntax errors... it's been a long time.. have you lost the need to write?... thank you for what you've given already
boring and totally unrealistic. more effort required
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