by CAP811
Love it. If Thurber could have gotten away with it, I'm sure that's what was REALLY going through Walter Mitty's mind.
As a Charter Member of the "Long Past It Daydreamers and Wankers Club", I welcome you to our group. I have a wonderful time with many of these same ladies in the Theatre of the Mind.
What middle-aged middle-class married man doesn't have fantasies like these? Well done! And of course the insertion of phrases from Jabberwocky selaed the deal! I look forward to the Further Adventures Of George Prufrock!
Clever use of Eliot and Thurber for this genre. Well written and amusing.
knew her - and her - and her - wellll doppelgangers away and forth to victory each and every - day - or sumpin lik dat - ah huh ah huh - maybe and possibly likely!<P>
Seriously - or not - great stuff Author<P>
Thanks with High Regard
I should have been a pair of ragged claws scuttling across floors of silent seas! Love it. - Alissa
Either you bumped your head, or you're smoking something really good, or most likely blessed with a fantastic imagination and the ability to put it into words. I have yet to read chapter 2 but have high hopes.