Accidental Incest

Forbidden fruit . . .

. . . makes an extremely hot story even hotter. The author's skilled writing makes you feel as if you're right there watching the brother and sister. Better yet, you feel as if you're participating!

JUST ONE THING!

Almost a five but the use of the ancient word 'nightshirt' was a real turn-off. Maybe it's still in common use in the USA but it reminded me of what my grandmother would have worn about eighty years ago!
The toss off and the fuck were wonderfully graphically described. The children are an unecessary footnote. A tiny bit more proof reading required but all in all it was great!

Way to go

As soon as the incest started, my cock got hard and stayed that way as I read the great detail you provided. Nothing more natural than brother-sister fucking. Keep writing. I enjoyed masturbating as I watched them fuck. The baby was a nice touch.

Way to go

As soon as the incest started, my cock got hard and stayed that way as I read the great detail you provided. Nothing more natural than brother-sister fucking. Keep writing. I enjoyed masturbating as I watched them fuck. The baby was a nice touch.

Please write more like this!

I thought your story was both sexy and loving. I like the way you ended the story. I enjoyed reading that this young woman wanted her brothers child and she got pregnant and had a daughter. Don't listen to the negitive post. You story was wonderful.

Another Great Story

Your stories are well worth reading,they hold your attention till the very end. Looking forward to reading more from you. Deserving of the praise you are getting.

Hot until the end

I really liked the story until the last paragraph. I personally don't think it's necessary to add that. It would be much hotter to write a story about 4 years later as opposed to writing a very non-erotic paragraph that left me not feeling as aroused as I did when reading the rest of the story.

Short But Hot!

I thought it was a really good tale. I just wish there had been more of it. Sibling incest is my favorite and you do a good job of telling that kind of tale. Thanks for sharing your story.

so hot

this story was amazing. beautiful.

great :-)

beautiful story very nicely done . . it is nice to see that a brother and sister can have a love like that . . having shared that with my own sis when we were both young . . it is also nice to see the two in your story shared the miracle of children . . healthy normal children . . which is statistically the probable outcome :-)

great :-)

beautiful story very nicely done . . it is nice to see that a brother and sister can have a love like that . . having shared that with my own sis when we were both young . . it is also nice to see the two in your story shared the miracle of children . . healthy normal children . . which is statistically the probable outcome :-)

VERY...VERY....SEXY WITH FULL OF LUST

PLEASE WRITE OTHER PART OF THIS STORY,UNTIL BOTH GROWN UP TO OLD AGE...............................................

VERY...VERY....SEXY WITH FULL OF LUST

PLEASE WRITE OTHER PART OF THIS STORY,UNTIL BOTH GROWN UP TO OLD AGE...............................................

Very hot and sexy...

and beautifully written. Excellent buildup that made the story seem so believable and the steamy scenes were just so juicy. You had it all, I was almost in tears when the policeman knocked on the door and almost wet my panties later. Terrific story...thanks.

you

i loved your stories.i wish you would write more of them

that shit is messed up u had a kid with ur bro wtf

ummm

What about the parents .......... good story though

FANTASTIC STORY!!

10 Stars for a great story!!! I hope you write more!!

Weirdly realistic.

I was in a very similar accident, and it's creepy how accurate this portrayal is. The helplessness, the aggravation, the growing resentment in the family, the desperation. Also some of the smaller things, like the description of the bar over the bed and the nature of the injury and how they fixed it. I don't know if this was written by someone who has been in this situation, or has seen someone in this situation, but kudos.